Chapter 11:
Emma was in a panic. How did he find her? Emma could see a passage leading somewhere. She darted for it. The inside smelled horrible! She could see rats hurrying along the walls, with rotten food, like pastries, and moldy, brownish greenish cheese. "Ewwww!" she shrieked. The tunnel led to a room that looked torn up and scruffy. There were things there I cannot bear to type. " What is this place?" she wondered. All of a sudden, she heard footsteps coming from another room.
Good use of surprise! I really want to find out who is there.
Posted by: BB | July 10, 2005 at 10:58 PM